THE ESSAY I WILL REMEMBER
For fourteen and fifteen year olds, deciding what to write about as a school project can be a difficult task, but one young man knew exactly what he wanted to write about.
Well he wrote his essay and he presented it to the class, but the grades have not come back yet and he is worried about whether or not it was good enough so he asked me to post it on my blog. He's a bit of a worry wort and he would like your brutally honest opinion. So here it is exactly as he wrote it.
By XXXX XXXXXX
History, it seems, has a tendency to repeat itself. Genocide is the mass extermination or discrimination against an entire group of people based on ethnicity , religion, or political beliefs. The earliest form of a genocide can be seen in the bible when the Egyptians enslaved the Jewish people. The first major publicized was during WWI when the Turkish government, killed over two million Armenians and over one million Greeks. Then during the 1930’s and 40’s, a mass extermination of millions of Jews, prisoners of war , and any and all people deemed as “unwanted” by fascist Germany during WWII. Then during the 90’s, the Serbian government killed eight thousand male Bosnians. Today, millions of dafurian people are being slaughtered
The Point to get across is the fact that some people will omit any accusations that a genocide happened. Like today’s neo Nazis who deny that the Holocaust ever happened,
When you turn on the T.V today, you see only the wars in
Now close your eyes for a second here. Imagine you are just a simple everyday person, except for one thing. You are starving because your government denies your ability to buy food. Now imagine you are a woman who has been raped, yet you can do nothing because the police are against you. Now imagine you are a child, a child that walks alone because your parents were slaughtered by the government and there bodies burned so you can not give them a proper burial. Now imagine you are a refuge from dafur, just arrived in
So do not deny, and do not forget. History has told us before to be alert, to never allow for deaths of millions to happen again, yet we still do. Genocide still happens today, and I believe we should let history be history, and never let it predict our futures. And above all, do not let one death be a tragedy and a death of a million just be a statistic.
15 Comments:
wow...did a 15 year old really write this? it speaks so much to him as an individual and then a young individual to be aware of this.....i hate to play devil's advocate but what is his reaction besides writing an essay to his teacher about darfur....
besides that, he is an insightful individual at that age to choose this topic on his own to write. it speaks alot to his character now and what he may be in the future...there is some hope for the future...:)
That's an extremely well written essay for a fifteen year old. In addition, his choice of subject and his handling of it thereafter displays a maturity of thought beyond his years.
Lisa Francisco,
Yes a 15 year old really wrote it, well barely 15, he turn 15 a couple of months ago. He was writing it to send to a Senator, but the opportunity arose to use it as a class project first and yes they were his thoughts and his words, I didn't even know that he had written it until he gave it to me to read.
We got tickled reading your comment about 'some hope for the future', because he used to blog and he called his self future world leader.
callieischatty,
Hi,it's so good to hear from you, miss you.
Id it is,
Yes he is pretty special, he is my grandson and sometimes shows a maturity that surprises me too. He is a history buff. I hope that he will follow up with his hopes and dreams to do some good in this world when he is old enough. And yes he composed that essay. He was very upset when he realized he spelled Darfur wrong.
That was wonderfully written...and very good imagery. Please update us when he receives his grade.
What aflight of thought. Very nice.
dio,
Yes once he gets an ideas he just seems to find the creativity to follow through. Thank you for visiting, come back anytime.
The essay is really nice. I hope your grandson gets an A on this one! There are so many injustices in the world that sometime I just don't know what to say. My expectations from human beings is pretty low.
This 15 year old has the words and the wisdom of one much older than him. The choice of subject and the way its written speaks volumes for the individual and the surroundings he was brought up in. Bravo, great work and wish him the best of luck for a future he will definitely play a part in.
Yoda,
I know just what you mean, my expectations are pretty low too. Sure is hard to find faith in the human race during times like these.
Destitute Rebel,
My grandson will be so excited to read your comment, that's exactly what he wants to do some day, is to contribute to making things a little better in this crazy world that he is growing up in.
I wish that I had that kind of insight when I was 15. Good job!
Capt. C,
I have a feeling you were pretty opinionated your own self at that age.
wooww.... got to love that kid...some great words
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