PIECES OF MY HEART
These memories I share with pride
they are the way I feel inside.
My fathers hands, my mothers arms,
the way I feel when they're around.
The way we used to play at night,
brothers and sisters saying goodnight.
Remembering those teenage years
with all the laughter and the tears.
My first corsage, the senior prom,
the way I cried when things went wrong.
My wedding day, my child at play,
the happiness I feel today.
The friends that come, the friends that go,
the love I feel for all I know.
These memories that I hold dear,
are pieces of my heart for sure.
they are the way I feel inside.
My fathers hands, my mothers arms,
the way I feel when they're around.
The way we used to play at night,
brothers and sisters saying goodnight.
Remembering those teenage years
with all the laughter and the tears.
My first corsage, the senior prom,
the way I cried when things went wrong.
My wedding day, my child at play,
the happiness I feel today.
The friends that come, the friends that go,
the love I feel for all I know.
These memories that I hold dear,
are pieces of my heart for sure.
posted by EXSENO at 7:26 AM
15 Comments:
That was lovely.
Damsel Underdressed,
Thank you, I enjoyed writing it. But it's not about me, it's just one of my poems. The fact is I never went to my prom and I don't have a brother. hehe
Nice poem! It brought back old memories of childhood. Lovely blog!
You have a way with words :)
...pieces of a beautiful heart...
'Pieces', yet intricately woven to clothe the sentiments of a lifetime!
Pices so beuatifully strewn together to weave patterns of your heart; so what if it's 'just one of my poem' as you say.
Sniffle, sniffle. My favorite line was, "the friends that come, the friends that go, the love I feel for all i know." I feel the same way.
this is so sweet!!! :-) Loved it!
Today's ranting,
Well good, if it brought back memories then it did what it was suppose to do.
Shannon,
Sometime I wonder.lol
Jinta,
Awe, you make me blush.
Aditya,
I think that describes a memories very well.
Id it is,
Nothing compared to your poems. You Write poetry like an expert. Are you?
Becky,
I think when it comes to poetry everyone has a favorite line that stand out in there mind. Glad you liked it.
How do we know,
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it.
Nice poem!
Happy Valentine's Day1
the poem tells a story .. nice. The verses that told the most and that i liked were:
Remembering those teenage years
with all the laughter and the tears.
My first corsage, the senior prom,
the way I cried when things went wrong.
Sorry to hear your prom went wrong. and awwww @ child at play .. that's always a lovely feeling, children are a gift from God.
and keep up the good work @ poetry :)
Hi Nabeel,
Are you back? I agree, children are a gift from God.
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